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Old 02-09-04, 06:03 AM   #12
DemonHunter
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This was a pretty good battle

Flow: Apathy
Punches:Both
structure:Apathy

Jamie - u lost points by sticken to the whole racial thing try to not go over to useing the word nigga and white boy as these are offensive as people dunt know wat u look like try to attack general things not race.

Apathy -good start and middle but ur ending needed to be more powerful if u had made a punch line at the end u would of completely merked jamie

Overall - Both did well!

My Unofficial vote goes to Apathy