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Old 02-09-04, 07:50 AM   #12
Straight Ace
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I'll start of by saying it was a close battle, but also played.
As in, that both sides had played lines.
Anyways on with the breakdowns..
Tech, you actually kind of surprised me..some nice lines..
But for example lines like that homosexual line? no...
A big no..not only uncreative also just....stupid.
But dont get me wrong overall u had a excellent verse..
Go battle in Elevated or some..dont spend ur time in FL.. its uncool
Some potential quotables in there..good verse.

W1cked.
Played..BUT..damn.. i mean some of that shit was just dope.
The played shit was dope...BUT the non-played shit (lol) was dope too.
I like the structure u used..more of an LLL feel you know?
Quite witty at points..also very surprising.
I liked ur whole verse..with exclusion of ur closer..cause it was just to played..
But other then that...nice.
& U get my vote for a simply more witty & enjoyable verse.
Punches-wise it was pretty even but for the reason stated above..
W1cked

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