Listen hoe.. Im gettin sick of all the attention for me your giving
Cant you see youve released 4 disses now.. And your still not winning
Nice opener, personal
This bitch.. Has nothing better to do than sit and type out pointless disses
Cant you see fucking idiot, that all the punches youve thrown are misses
alright, a bit played
You dont know.. You havent heard what people say about you behind your back
'Kaos Theory is an arrogant bastard'.. and.. 'Wise Ways really is wack'
liked this line, nice punch at the end, made me laugh
Everybody hates you.. Do you want to know why two people just left your crew
Well.. Hate to break it to you son.. But those two dope heads left because of you
another good line, also made me laugh

This mother fucker tries and fails.. Like a retarded horse trying to jump a fence
After this you'll be dead and gone...
... So im speaking of you in the past tence
alright lines,, horse line a bit played,i think. past tence tho nice!
Even your own mother hates you.. But the only reason your not disowned
Is because you mother feels sorry for you...
... Always insists your not fat your just big boned
lol.
Fat bastard and fast food eater.. All you do is put on weight
Your so love-struck by food...
... You think McDonalds is your fucking soul mate
lol love this line, made me laugh.fav line.
Silly hoe.. Nobody listens to you at all.. Especially 'When You Speak'
Can tell you wrote your Open Mics...
... Because like you they are weak
ok line.
By saying.. 'U just need to shut tha fuck up & shut ya wack mouth'.. You really took a gamble.. Just rolled the dice
But in my opinion you need to read it yourself...
... And take your own fucking advice
nice, fliped him. lol
Nobody likes you.. You dumb fuck.. Why dont you wake up and see
You never used to drop Open Mics.. So quit it and stop tryin to be like me
also nice ender contrast him to you.
ok nice diss.

lol this piece had quite a lot in it.

FLOW. Your flow worked well with the piece all the way through and complimented the structure. 9/10.

STRUCTURE. You structure like i've told you many times i like a lot, ya also changed structures in this spit which i thought came to good effect, to show ya can spit in more way than one. 9 /10

PUNCHES. You had some good punches against wise, and i'd say for 80% of the spit they were good, but ya had some not so good punches aswell. 8/10

PERSONALS. This is where i thought you did the piece justice, and as it was a diss to wise, it should of had alot of personals in the piece. and you did, and a lot of funny ones i thought. 9/10

VOCAB.vocab was decent but not the best, was alright for the most part 8/10

fave line = Fat bastard and fast food eater.. All you do is put on weight
Your so love-struck by food...
... You think McDonalds is your fucking soul mate

Overall a good diss .:freeman:., keep up the good om's. 35/40