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Whoa...
This was tight...
Lets start by critisizing your ass...
Im confused as to why its called '....X....'
Thats all the critisizm out of me...
Moving on...
iight... Imagery was excellent... You can picture him being led to the car... Can picture in your mind how he was revived by the smelling salts... How he has no lower jaw bone when the police came... Amazing...
Flow was on through most...
Vocabulary was there... Could of been more... But it was enough as it was... Maybe more would of over done it...
You described it all very well... Instead of using basic words like 'brown'... You used 'mahagony'... Makes it that much better...
Creative... It was just that... Never seen anything like this... So its original aswell...
Keep dropping hoe 
Hit up... 'The Challenge' in my sig...
Thanks...
Pz...
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