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Banned: Spamming
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Originally Posted by SMZ
Flows alright here but I've seen better from you. First four bars after "I know...please continue" are all kinda choppy. Vocab nice and descriptive once again. Well told story
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^ It wasn't meant to rhyme..it was the narration...and yes lot of my works are more of a story,,which makes me different from the most...  |