Lyrical.. a few relatively ok punches.. opener wasnt terrible.. u got the rite idea wiv metas i guess.. jus make em more personal an wittier..
Lust.. dawg u gotta sort it out.. there is nothin even like a flow.. each punch is old and stand alone.. an both ya opener an closer didnt rhyme, let alone make sense.
Vote = Lyrical
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