Carson - personals were on point.. picked on erry aspect.. turned em into nice punches.. felt u were consistant thru out.. nice closer.. got a chuckle.. overall a pretty dope verse..

Ace - no quotables to speak of.. didnt like the style cos it kinda killed the flow.. yes the punches were witty but wordplay was weak.. some of those lines really let the rest down.. and the closer jus didnt really close it.

VoTe = Carson

More enjoyable read.. nice flow.. an consistant.

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