ok one quick 16 i just wrote...lookin at it now it still lacks vocab, but common words can be used effectively to get a message across.

from the blunt to the bong ill be blunt in this song
i get high not low so im no lil jon
although i flow like h20
i burn hydro...love the way it dissolves
but my world dont revolve around mary jane
simple and plain i evolved from the pain
and the pressure that tests ya temper everyday
no free rides here in western sydney
we just live in debt and financial regrets
financial stress tests all our limits
borders our minds but reorders my lines
to find a solution, a truth with no lies
to prove our demise arrives in no time
we need to realise we live off our pride,
experience is the key for us to survive
so expect the solution to open up your eyes.