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Old 02-09-04, 12:27 PM   #10
HeXen
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yo...dis was an ok battle.lyric ur verse wasnt bad for a newb needs a bit of work tho,it had no flow and punches came week,structure was ok....work on it bro..Set ur verse was ok 2,ur puches hit a bit harder and flow was a bit beter 2..lacking structure bro work on dat...
overall set~ignorance takes dis coz his punches hit a bit harder and flow was beter.....good battle tho....keep it up both of u.....aaaiiight..
v/set~ignorance(by a bit)
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