its the composition of the actual instrumentation and then your vocals..are fuckin Zach De La Rocha cloned type bullshit..dude serious..i realy cant stand how you're delivering your rimes..and the actual instrumentation of all your instruments seems so outta rhythm..its like a group of talentless yuppies thrown in a room full of instruments and told to play them the best they can without even knowing what they're doing..i dont have a problem with the rap and rock shit..if its done well..and thats the reason why people get called wack..is when they think they have something that realy isnt there..no offense buddy..but i realy believe you need to polish this alot more before your bring your experiments to the table..

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