I liked it, I'm not gonna go off on the "Legends" Spiel, but it may well deserve it.
I have a criticism to lay down before I get to the glorifying.

My main problem with this, is you would lose your flow every once in a while, usually due to a scheme change, sometimes you would put a transition in, sometimes you wouldn't. With a rhyme scheme like this, It makes it very hard for the reader to actually keep the flow.


Now onto the good stuff. Without a doubt, you are one of the best storytellers on RB, no joke. It's wonderfull to see someone putting so much effort into every piece they throw out. Your vocab in this one, was very well suited for the piece, it was just enough to be noticed, but not take the attention away from the story. Your imagery bro, It's just great, no other way to put it.

All in all, this was a great piece, easily deserves an open mic of the month slot, but I just don't know about legends.