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Old 02-09-04, 03:01 PM   #14
Brethren
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Breakdown: Apathy had some decent punches wordplay, the space where your brain is line was hot, I didn't understand a thing Jamie said, I didn't even think he was rapping, only baby and crazy just barely rhyme, so overall, you fucking suck. Hit some punches, shock value shit is over now Jamie, get some creativity. Apathy, you're opener was garbage, throw that away. Make your two best bars the opener and closer. Jamie, hit the Wackness Center Immediately, get some help before continuing trying to rap.

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