Well..........its been said before but self glorification OM rarely ever fly on Open Mic.....but you just got started.......your lackin a lot in this piece..........flow, vocab, etc........your new to the RB world i see.........ill i can tell you is keep at it......you only get better with time.......dont let anyone bring ya down an keep ya head up..........peace....hit my latest piece up when you get the chance.......

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