yes yes yes yes..............dope pen...story was nice never saw that ending comming either..i thought you were going for a more disease realted ending or some ish...however though it didnt end completely it was dope no doubt..im guessing the bold is the Cop speaking to the witness? if not oh well...thats how i wanna perceive it...still dope however...Very!.............nice imagery and shit..rough flow at times..but i guess thats the story

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