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Old 02-09-04, 04:25 PM   #1
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Ill- Nice Verse , Good Structure, Nice Flow With Good Punches, Work On Personals... They Were Weaker Compared To Lawyers Ones

Lawyer- Aight Verse Elevate Structure Wus Not Good,Had Ok punches And ok Flow . Aight Personals Eventhough Both Were Kinda Played...Make Ur Lines Shorter..cuz They Kinda Stretched.

Flow- Ill
Punches- Ill
Structure- Ill
Vocab- Both
Personal- Lawyer
Overall- Ill

Enjoyed- None The Verses were BAsic...Nothin ExtraOrd Na'mean

Goodluck.

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