Thread: Poetry try #2
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Old 02-09-04, 05:24 PM   #5
cameronj86
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thanks y'all, I didn't get to put much feeling into this one as I should've... It was just a reply to some guy who was spitting some emo stuff in the freestyle cypher.... Next time i'll try and work on the imagery and a little more in other areas too...

My fav line in my own thread... (he can't be that arrogant can he.. lol)

.........................................and full of spite see
Regret cuz I can't accept that you used to like me

That was the only one I really felt... cuz the rest was really just trying to get stuff to rhyme... Thanks for the feedback..
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