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Old 02-09-04, 05:29 PM   #3
Menik
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lol one sided battled.

deacon: You ripped him lol, everything was better overall, you had the better punches, some made me laugh....better vocab....better structure...had the better flow to it as well i thought.

d-struct: you need to elevate....your punches didnt really do anything for you...work on your punches....flow was ok, but i thought deacons was better....try not to rhyme the same word like you did.

Overall this was pretty one sided...vote goes to deacon for the better overall verse.
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