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Old 02-09-04, 06:24 PM   #9
Holmes Jr.
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KillaConcepz- Your verse was alright, the flow was really weak I mean the syllable counts were like polar opposites..liked your punches, especially the penis one and your closer, I didn't see any multis but thats cool, I see you put some personals in there um the verse wasn't too original just sounded typical but overall 7/10

Wordplay- Your flow was MUCH smoother, however your punches weren't quite as powerful, still saw no multis, the personals werent all that personal..and this doesn't weaken your verse or anything but puttin your bars like that with // at the end is lame as fuck...5/10

Vote- KillaConcepz by a long shot
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