LMAO at jesus getting headaches from hearing us bitch all the time.
Words cannot describe how muhc I love that concept.
you had decent imagery, and a strong writer's voice. I could feel the emotion coming from each person, which is dope, because each person wasn't you. it's difficult to write about the pain of others.
There were flow issues here and there, it was a bit choppy during jesus's intro, but other than that, twas dope.
Niceness Mentill.

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