hmm interestin id love to see what pic u wrote this too...interestin piece...started seemin like it would come off like most rapz...talkin bout how talented u r at ur "rhymes" an so on but it seemd to change...iuno i would suggest a dif beginning to it...osmethin to kinda draw in the reada mo...but it seemed to take on its own mind...

I am man with no fears, no enemies, no strengths and no weaknesses, yet i cannot live my life without music,
For it is the essence of the very thing that keeps me alive in this world,
Oh what would it be like without this music of mine!?

i think this best stated what i saw...as the topic of dis...hpe to read mo of ur ish

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