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Old 02-09-04, 08:47 PM   #6
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Kryo-O had great plans to be the best in rapbattles.com/
But when he fighted Amazin a.k.a. 8th Street his rhymes were done//
^ Fighted? don't you mean Fought? ....and it doesn't rhyme

Now u wanna follow me to shade your tears on me/
Kry won't solve your problems, try the 8th Street rhymes academy//
^ k wait.. are you smokin something.. shade? don't you mean shed

In a century, when u get outta there, u'll still playin the lil romeo flow/
Askin why? What's the word to define what u don't have? "talent" that's the word//
Don't be mad at me homie, u just were born retarted/
U were born with cells mutations, i've seen unpretty lifes, but yours is the sadest//
^ baha.. what rhymes there?

Your battle rhymes are like the Bulls season, no way u can get a win/
So accustomed to losin that u don't even argue 'bout the reason u don't get a ring//
^ one of the weakest punches i've seen

I can see your face now, it have that looks of "why i'm fadin"/
Is just that u didn't saw it comin, i hitted u like a shoot-to-blank trainin//
^ You can't spell at all, and makes little sense becuase of it

8th street, let me give you an important lesson of mine
If you're battlin' try to make atleast one word rhyme
^ LOL, exactly, nice punch

Leave you hurt, Im quick to squirt bury you with the shovel
I'm a rebel, so thorough, and you suck more than a dirt devil
^ not bad.. kills anything 8th-street dropped

Wait til it's dark,sniper you with the dart, move in for the kill
This lil bitch cant handle beef so I'll offer him veil
^ not bad..

mleh.. sorry can't vote yet.
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