opener:tactixx edged out on top with his opener..the flow alone was structured well.
crunch's opener was just filler, it really had nothing to do with anything..crunch you need to try and not use that gun shit, it makes you look really amature.... :tactixx::

structure:crunch's structure was decent, It was just a little choppy because each line was short a sylable or two....
tactixx structure changed after the third line, but it was still flowing pretty well.............::tactixx::


punches:tactixx had all these, but they got weak and played after the fourht line....::tactixx::

wordplay:none

multiples:tactixx whole opener used multiples ,I wish the whole verse was typed like that......
crunch needs to elevate and quick, or he is gonna end up losing a lot.::Tactixx:

closer:tactixx closer was simple and played, but not as played as crunch's closer::tactixx:

vote tactixx