I think Virtuoso got this one, he used better punches, threw some personals in there and I liked the multi-syllable rhyming which is something you dont see much around here...got a little typo in your closer but it was still alright, Isqael your stuff wasnt bad the shit was just played like mad, and the flow was too uneven to enjoy it..
Vote- Virtuoso
Return the favor please
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