This started out nice, the middle started to have content sacrificed for flow, and what the Hell was that ending.

I would definitely revise that ending. You go from talking about fallen angels and dead men walking to homosexual tendencies and such.

"voicez underground of fallen angelz screamin' through wellz..."
^^Right where the quality dips into suck.

Also, spell out the words wholly and correctly. There is no need for that stupid "z" instead of "s" shit.