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Bonezcollecterr
i wan say 2 thangs, first of i aint losing, like i said... -2 thangs-//
second the only time you get THE W is when u listening to -WU TANG-//
you probly just a ugly ass nigga, and if you dont agree, you know damn well you be in -de-nial-//
if you was FUCKING wit FREE.. and got 2 more STYLES.. you could'nt fuck wit -FREE(three)STYLES-//
imma spit 16 bars, fuck the rules -you declared-//
great exaple this nigga is, fucking :::it::: STAY ON MY NUTS like -PUBIC HAIR-//
you go to work to get PAID, but soon as ya get to da ATM, i -snach yo PAY-//
look at you with your CHEESEY rhymes, hate to bust your bubble.. but today -NATCHO day-//
c'mon, you not popping shit, holla at me when you find out actually -who spray thangs-//
im not finna LOSE, cause lets face it, only "L's" bone ever see are da one in -COOL J's name-//
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....What to say....
Some very played lines....
punches were.. blah... weak
wordplay was... never seen
Personals... were unknown
He tried to glorify himself to much
structure.......wtf does he kno what it means?
Overall... needs elevation... 8/20
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Thing
BoNe'zCoLlEcTeRr.. ..< exactly like that.. ..please kill ya self
i didnt no capital 2 lower case was still da thing 2 do.. ..u need help
& ya wanabe pistol thing.. ..i will say hello.. ..cuz u have no power
i mean u spent a week to make that.. ..get a clue.. ..it doesnt tower
from DiRtY~sOuTh.. ..shut ya mouth.. ..cuz i'll rip ya snout.. ..da fuck?
u not nas.. ..look then pause.. ..realize u a fraud.. ..kinda odd.. ..huh?
how u gona say u collect bones.. ..means how many times fucked in ass
how u gona stay n erect zones.. ..impadent haunts ya rhymes.. ..next,pass
so jus stfu u stupid mother fucker i hate u.. ..every1 will rape u,eat u
ya diseatful.. ..full of the wrong produce,ya brand doesnt make it,eww
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Eh.. decent
Punches were... soft but ok
Personals were... blah.. not really
Structure was better than bonez
Wordplay was original.. not great
Flow was good... ... ...
Overall.. decent... 12/20
V/Thing
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