ummm...the content was good...but I didn't really see any flow or structure...the only linez I saw multiez in...and the only 2 linez that I actually found the rhymin' wordz in were the 1st 2...and they were stretched as fuck...therefore makin' them lose their flow...but it was a nice little story...but it was long as fuck...and like I said...out of the whole piece...the only rhyme I caught was in the 1st 2 linez...