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Originally Posted by Tactixx

OPENER:Holmes got no chance,there aint no stoppin me,
it's like i got hotels on every property in monopoly,
I own the board, the only way you win is copy me,
CLOSER
My shit's more intelligentual than a college thesis,
i shatter your rep......now you can pick up the pieces....

The opener was a kick ass meta. I liked how tactixx worked in triplets because it shows that he actually has to have two good lines in a row and then he hits with the final blow each time. The closer was pretty good as well. the one thing wrong was the tattoo line. it seemed out of place, but i liked the 'through a straw' line.

Holmes was much less complex and more generic that tactixx. he tried to use played gay stuff, and that's getting old.

Tactixx took this one. VOTE; TACTIXX

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