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Old 02-09-04, 10:26 PM   #17
dirtyendzone
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Lust's opener didn't rhyme the word dictionary. In the second to last line, trip doesn't rhyme with anything. not rhyming really hurt his flow. otherwise, his verse had some strong punches and i liked the rhyme about the grim reaper poster.

Tactixx started with a good 4 line opener, but he failed to capitalize on the rhyme of the opponent's name, Lust, with the other 4 words he used. Tactixx' flow was pretty good, but some punctuation would have made the closer much better.

In a close one, MY VOTE GOES TO TACTIXX. No hate for lust, it was real close.

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