iont really like the beat, but thats irrelavant, cuz you're riddin it nicely....
skipped off the beat towards the end...
your expression and feelin is really nice, i wish i could master that.....
not bad at all, just keep workin, you got a good voice and all, elevate on the lyrics a lil and study the beat some to stay on it and you'll def be ill
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113082 <~my thread...