wise ways, nice verse, but i've seen better from you,
punches was aight should of tried harder, i know you just
lackin off just playin wit this guy, structure was decent,
not much to say about it, closer was dope, but to many people
are killing closers like that stuff like it was over in so and so line,
next time throw some personals in their dawg, but dont focus
on personals cause than you forget to throw sonme punches in
their.

crunch, your shit was aight for a noob, you still need to learn
more bout personals, and multis, you focused to much on your
punches, and they were still weak, most of your punches were played,
like most people said, you should try battlin some one like me, not go
straight to battlin some one like wise ways ya know, keep elevating though.

my vote: wise ways

hit this up, everyone is sleeping on it, its been open for like a week.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111274