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Old 02-09-04, 11:19 PM   #6
Pariah
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Holmes Jr. Vs. Sir Q Layshun

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I dont have enough posts to officially vote but here is what I thought. Pretty close battle. Both verses flowed nicely and had good structure. Holmes Jr. had a few decent punches... Lil' John line was okay... wasn't feeling the line Makhai Phiper though. Also thought Holmes' had a weak ending with some
filler lines, including a personal that seemed played. Overall decent vocab, not the best verse as far as creatvity though. Sir Q'... really liked the
sumo line, and the 'pass a fist ' meta, however the opening lines were weak
and uninspired creativly. As was the closer, still though punches were decent. Vocab okay and a creative lines.

Flow - Tie (both had good flow/structure)
Punches- Holmes( barely, kinna weak from both)
Personals-Holmes(Even thought it was played still was better than nothing)
Vocab-Tie
Creativity-Sir Q. Layshun

My vote goes to Holmes Jr. although both had kinda' weak punches his just hit slightly harder. He also had a personal that was obvious which was still stronger than Sir Q's line a ' 1st loss '. Dope meta by Sir Q' and nice creativity but the punches really didn't hit hard enough.
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