lol, very nicely done.

You all came with some very hard punchs, but the roster thing did get a little old and played.
All of you used the same structure which made it that much easier to read, all flowed very well. I could sense the animosity towards wits end through out the whole read.
Also, the comic value of this was stellar. I laughed out loud a good 4-5 times. The web cam thing with aisle 5 was great, the hard personals from out write, also hard personals from feeble, walter finished with that great ending. An exceptional diss. Well done, guys. You managed to hit all of wits ends VIP's within about 20 bars. This is due much applause.

If you could please, please, return the favor with some honest feedback on my piece, The Soldiers Creed, in my sig. I would appreciate it very much, it is being horribly slept on. And I tried out a new style, and I would really like to know what people think about it.