haha take a chill pill nigga the lyrical evaluator is here to give you your feedback...The concept was really a good idea, i sure havent seen it much around here and i liked it. there was good imagery and you really got in this guy's head could feel the nerve rackin tension, i like how you put consistent multis in there, your vocab was well used but some of it needs to elevate just a little, i mean most of it was hot but there were a couple typical words. the flow was even sometimes but somewhere in the middle it started sounding a little bit forced. 7/10 though, keep it up and next time try to extend your stuff alot..

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