crunch:
this nigga walkin round callin him self wise ways
battlein niggaz like me he wont be seein many more days
an atempted punch ... half decent...4/10
the onli thing pleazin wise ways is the way young boyz cream
we got n r kelly nigga who cnt capolize on his big dream
r.kelly lines played...gay twist was corny..not a good line 3/10
so mah man sits on a website bitein shyt off ol gs
he goes to bed prayin every night just to b like me
not good again...coulda did much better with that set up 3/10
original flow n the original lines keep on hittin
wise got that sweet look in his eye got lil boys shittin
didnt pan out as well as you wished....3/10
so im a sit hear put mah dick in ur ear so u can hea when im cummin
dun get to excited b it aint b the guys im luvin
2 total opposite lines not good...didnt make sense...set up was ehh..3/10
overall you had ok flow....dont seperate your bars...sreucture was OK...PUNCHES need work...wordplay need work....personals werent there....overll 16-50

wise:
Kid got pissed off at a lu-ow..& still couldn't throw a punch
Nice name..making it true when I literally snap ya neck *crunch*
decent punch,personal ...7/10
I'll touch you with two power lines..& leave ya ass in shock
Ya rhymes are cornier than flicks made by Alfred Hitchcock!
decent...alfred hitchcock is the shit tho! 5/10
Fucking with me? what..bitch, son, fag, you new to this
& tha only time you seen pussy is coming out ya moms uteris!
haha...cool line...funny...decent punch/fake personal maybe 7/10
Bet crunches punches are shit..don't expect more from a n00b
You a faggot & I'll expose that kind of like Janet Jacksons boob!
cooll....use the janet lines while u still can!!lol...6/10
You made a mistake..you should of listened to yaself & declined
Cuz bitch this battle was over right after I typed tha 2nd line!
good closer....nice punch....ok personal if he was debating the battle...7/10
overall....good strucutre....you obviously win this with your punches, wordplay, personals on his name........just a better overall....waste of a nice verse.....goo job tho.....
vote - wise

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