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		iight... 
 
Nice topic... Havent seen this before... Maybe its been done... But ive not seen it anyway... 
 
You had good imagery going on here... You used your vocabulary to a nice extent... That hottened the piece up... 
 
Structure and flow were decent enough for this... 
 
Basically just keep dropping man... 
 
Keep it up...   
 
Pz... 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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