Lets go MuSick....yo......yo.......
MuSick,u make me sick, bet u heard that before,
thats why niggas who fuck with me, end up on the floor,
ive already heard two other bars similar to this one in the past two days... Over all wasnt feeling this opening, it came off weal
Bitch, im the pimp in this, and u the hoe,
i dint wanna hurt u, but u whack 4 sho,
set is play adn weak, follow through is half filler, then weak
listen to me when i rhyme, this is fuckin prime time,
but if i dint hit u up, it would be a crime,
filler type is. Not sure if you were shooting for the prime time/crime line.. If you were it was alright, but could have been a better connection metaphor
my flows so slick, i'll win this battle easily,
should call u Mu'Shit', n i no you jacko, Sleasily,
boasting about yourself, not that good of a line in my eyes. Follow through needed rewording
i looked at your battle against Lyrical MC,
u were wasted dawg, u dumb to fuckin test me
eh, alright shot at a personal. it connected as for line to line inthe bar. ending could have been better though

Over all i thought you needed to work on your punchs, as well as your metaphors.They sort of lacked, and didnt realy come off hard at all. Your flow was basic and you needed multis.

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Im like shakespeare rappin with thought through lines
Ur rhymes are old an played out like u in the victorian times
eh, opening is alright. although you needed a smoother flow through the lines. Punchs arent much, boasting isnt either.
Ur wack an u know-it ur like a broken down car
When im finished ur gonna have to toe-it while I inject u wiv sars
bar is alright. Metaphors are alright. Punch could have came off better though, and a little more directed
Ur name reflects who u are, jus another number on a website
U got a pussy an a dick thats too far, its sick ur a hermaphrodite
alright bar. punch is ok but could have been a little more.
Now listen up son, don't bring no dickriders to this battle
Or imma beat u like im ur new daddy an choke u with ur rattle
basic bar. the rattle line is played. the punch could have been better
U frontin like ur a main-stream emcee name like Jay-Z
Ur wack cuz ur 'Crazy in Love' with urself but u rap like Macy
endign is alright. name caslling was alright, good connection, but the macy part could have went a little bit further with something

Over all your punchs were there, and you had alright metaphors, but you needed a little more direction and strength in your bars.

vote-Musick
Ill Poll it once some one votes on my battle..
He took it with harder punchs and better metaphors.

Peep the battle, drop an honest vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112998

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