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Old 02-10-04, 07:28 AM   #5
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Timeless - its not recommended that u confesss to recyclin in a battle.. that line almost killed ya.. but u picked it up from there an stayed consistant to the end.. harder punches an a few nice personals chucked in there made for an ok read.. nicer concepts made for better meta4s.

Code - too much 'self-glorification' an not enough punches im afraid.. looked like u packed a load of filler in to complete the verse.. personals werent connecting an the flow was choppy.. not a nice read.. but uv come stronger before so keep elevatin.

VoTe = timeless

drop a vote on this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

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