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An alright poem, I wrote one very similar to this one. This piece(very much like my own) had no emotion. It was basically a very well written piece to explain how you feel about poetry. The vocab was a little higher than usual, but for this type of poem it should have been more complex. The rhyme scheme was good, strong for most of the parts, but fell off a couple of times. Not much emotion, but still very good poem. I think the poem should have been longer to make the reader get more feeling out of the piece. aight.
-Sleepy-
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