The first line I liked alot, it had alot of meaning. Then after that you just confused the hell outa me, but u did with "intelligence", which made it fuckin awesome. The vocab was very strong in this one, and it fit with the poem well. messages varied, from very deep to very confusing. Feelings also varied, from "wow thats deep" to "What the fuck does that mean?". It was very unstable but i guess thats what made it original. I definetely liked it alot. like said by the person before me, keep writing, ill be sure to keep reading.

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