Very good poem, mostly because it was deep while being short. The poem would have undeniably have ended with mention of war, which is good. It is a great Idea to mention war of life and death in this poem because it is so very true. The vocab is ok, not much to say about it. The structure, unique, bleak, great. the length, short, but perfect. the message deep, heartfelt, philosophical. overall, great poem (sorry for the short response but i dont have much time and it is a short poem.)

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