Eki - that opener was kinda predictable.. yeah it was personal but its a played concept wiv the 'loss already a factor' line.. it seemed kinda forced like u was jus lookin for a word to rhyme.. the 'opera' line was cool.. but the 'groove' line ruined it before hand.. i liked the 'action movie' line.. nice meta.. but u had a fair bit of filler in there an any decent lines u had seemed to come in 1's cos the accompanyin line would ruin it.. not bad overall but uv dropped hotter before.

Chapter - nice openin 4 lines.. very witty an the 'avatar' line got a chuckle.. u were consistant thru out altho in the middle u seemed to go a bit general.. but u finished wiv the best personal of the battle.. there were alot of nice metas in there.. jus work on not bein general at any point an look to sharpen the structure up.. but keep elevatin.. i see alot of potential.

VoTe = Chapter

Drop a vote here plz Eki:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

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