i seriously cant believe that kid..fucking retarded

anyway..
what can i say that i dont to all your short story pieces?
plain ill..
it took me a short while to grasp what was actually happening and a second read would no doubt enhance my enjoyment of it
you dropped subtle hints in the first passages which gave clues to where the whole thing was going and the setting etc
with every sentence i knocked another brick away to the whole picture
use of language and vocabulary was class A
good to see another person who can use some what seemingly non existant words, at least on rb
you'd think the dictionary is dying by some users on heres vocab
imagery was again class in this
littered the verse with an array of brilliant images that i can picture in my head and that cannot be under estimated
pure dope
muchos props
the sad thing is..
this will get maybe 5 replies if youre lucky