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IP:
Hmm...
Imagery was the strong point... It was your best image portraying piece that ive read... And as its a story... That is what matters...
You will get herbs come in here who wont read this and just go... 'O yeh... Dope... Fuck you penskills... Im so jealous... Wish a could write like this...'
And the few herbs that do read it... Will go... Why doesnt it rhyme in some places... Well... The reason is this idiots... ITS A STORY...
Pen... You have set the level for OM's... Ive tried... But as of yet... Ive not beat you... Some of my pieces have been better than some of yours... As im sure you will admit... But ive not reached this standard... YET...
Cant give you any more than my respect... Which is what you have earnt now...
Well Done...
Glad your epic is finally finished... Lol...
Enjoy it everyone...
Pen... Check my Chapter Two tomorrow... Thanks...
Pz...
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