Chapter - another nice verse.. an u won it based on ya opener alone..
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Originally Posted by chapter
Its clear this chump is new to RB.. as well as the whole rap game
cos really.. wot kinda idiot publicly guns his own name??
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iv been waitin fa someone to put the machine gun pic in the wrong place! Consistant punches.. alot of nice concepts there.. but u do go off point a bit an get somewhat general.. then again ur new here so ya not likely to know much about people.. overall a pretty dope verse kid..
Grenade - eh the style has gotta change quick man.. puttin 1. blah blah blah, 2. blah blah blah etc jus aint cool.. an u used alot of unecessary words jus to create a rhyme but it was heavily stretched.. any punch was lost by the time u finished the line.. the structure is weak too.. u need to diss ur opponent more directly an get a bit personal..
VoTe = Chapter