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Old 02-10-04, 10:49 AM   #19
TheUnderRated
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Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory...
.....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense
^the cents sense thing.....kinda played if you ask me...weak personal...
Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes
Had problems with camarac...
......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges
^heheh good backround check...this is an ok personal...alias stuff...
Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce
Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse
^good multis...ok punch.....
*Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels
Flows like loose change.....
...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple
^i don't like the rhyme scheme on this one...weak punch...
Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite
So ya had ta join Elemental...
......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat
^ok this is a good personal....kinda played with the who beat who but overall not bad.....

Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin
Idiot hacked into my desk theme..
..Just to get under my skin
^meh computer wordplay....i'd stay away from it....
Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played
Fuck getting in Elite..
..You're getting the opposite of OKed
^this was nice wordplay.....i think its been done b4 but still nice...
This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke
but on the contrary..
..You really are dope!
^hheh short but sweet a good punch....
I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance
Only slightly in view..
..When taking a glance!
^ok punch....good wordplay.....
Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle
I'd say you went overboard..
..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle!
^good personal...good wordplay nice punch.....
Overall i think token came with a more creative verse and took this with a direct hitting style rather than a style that encompassed many aspects of the battle in moderation which is how i felt illunitics came off......pz

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