Aiight, This was v/ good.

BID and Kwizikz, You both compliment each others style, fairly similar, but i understand why, the flow was tight throughout, it could maybe do with some multis in, the vocab really stepped this up for the intelligent readers, the content on both behalfs was interesting, fresh and original concept. I enjoyed this reading this piece, so good job to both of you!!

good luck in the future guys. pz