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Old 02-10-04, 12:16 PM   #11
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BTK takes this.. His flow stayed consistent and didn't really fall off at any point. While Menolins flow was all over the place. You need to work on re wording your lines to where they meet their full affect. BtK.. you're still elevating man but you'll get there because I know you can come harder than this. But still you took it with a few witty concepts while Menolin had forced wordplay. Nothing is worse than forced flow and wit/wordplay.

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