Born To Kill
Here's tha truth: ya ugly and you called out, I answered, you lose...
But Menolin, ya can't face tha facts, cuz the facts won't face you.
multi's,wordplay = 6
No profile on Menolin, must be embarrassed that he even exists...
The only bitch who could work a kissing booth, and not get kissed.
personal,punch,metiphore = 4
Cuz let me be Frank, and say ya suck through and through...
And while I'm at it, Bill, Joe, & Ted...wanna rip on you too!
metiphore = 3
Cuz ya gotta huge head and no brain, in tha dark bout being a fool...
So when I pulled his head out tha sand, his parents built a pool.
metiphore,punch = 5
It's why they love the family dog better, hardly ever tell it no...
But they don't love it like a child, Menolin set that bar too low.
punch = 5
Not too good, seemed like you had writer's block here, things got worste as you went on. The pool metiphore was pretty funny, but all in all this was a very sub-par verse.
Overall = 23
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Menolin
a load of sex life punches... off BTK is now what i expect...
projecting through punches...
.........everything in his life... which he never gets...
wordplay,punch = 8
try your luck against me.. i'll leave your luck with dice,
more chance winning...
......than rolling with a snake eyes with one die...
-flo,metiphore,self hype = 3
all in know about you is you been on RB forever,
an rocked that same avy..
so much, that on my comp its becoming weathered,
personal,metiphore = 7
my motto.... bring in the new, get rid of the old,
you once brought the heat, now im ridding of the cold,
filler = 3
if i lose, it will be like judge judy losing her baby..
a mis-carage of justise..
but never mind BTK.. a miricle might happen.. maybe?
wordplay,metiphore,punch = 7
You had the best line of the battle and the worste line's of the battle. However you did open an close your verse well, just inbetween was iffy. This was a decent verse tho, consistency is what lacked here.
Overall = 28
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