Damn Thug..I remember you telling me you were going to write about this and it definately turned out amazing...The personification and especially the imagery is what made this such an awesome piece, the way you worded everything in such a unique way, it really tickled the imagination and added to the power of the topic..Every line made you think about what was going on and the descriptions were so detailed and distinctive: nothing short of amazing..The whole thing was brilliant but I must say the ending is what got me the most..Even though you can sort of decipher some from the title alone and excerpts from the earlier paragraphs, the last line or two were the killers..This was very well written, makes me kind of want to try my hand at short stories instead of poetry for a minute...

..You'll definately get an A