when i started reading this i thought i had the idea of where you were going to take it, but that i was wrong. and really im not sure where you did take it, i have so many different thoughts now going throu my head from those few lines that really its crazy. it mentions alot of different topics, but all relates somehow. although there isnt really a point or a message it seems to this piece, it flows well and sounds good. your vocab was awsome also. the whole piece reminds me of abstract somehow.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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